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TTO audition-Prologue

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After cheating his way inside by using a mysterious spell book in his possession, a young man started exploring the ruins of an underground temple.

Even so he reached far inside than many that came here before couldn't grasp, a long passage way blocked by earth and rocks caused maybe from some earthquake but the use of explosives would worse the situation which the spell book come in handy by clearing the way as he did to entry the temple, reaching in a hall which you would really say that place was hit by earthquake because some of pillars were smashed in pieces on the floor.

Standing now before an unexplored room of very temple wondering which artifacts lies behind of massive stone door. The door didn't bugged no matter how much he tried, until he relied on his spell book to knock the door down.

The floor trembled with the fall of door but it kept trembling before he noticed that the celling was falling apart and the door had become the main column of this room after all this years.

The young man had no idea of what to do, with the short time that he had and nowhere to run. He casted the spell he thought the most effective, closed his eyes and prayed for better.

After few sounds he heard a zap and everything went quiet. Then said a voice.

"Wake up."

Opening his eyes he see a kid in from of him in a room filled with clocks of differents sizes and shapes.

"Welcome! I am Father of Time, the god of time, and welcome you to..."

"Hell?"-interrupting Father of Time.

"Wait what?" confused, Father of time asked.

"Damn it! I died ... and I still feel hungry! This is a nightmare for sure!"-talking to himself like an insane-"Who would believe that hell exist, I am so doomed."

"Why would you be dead?" asked the Father of Time trying to understand what he was talking about.

"Of course I am dead that place fell all over me, you know when you are on temple and celling of stone start crumble above your head if that didn't kill me, why would I be here?" answered the young man.

"Let me say it, you are alive and this isn't hell either."-replied father of time "This place is my domain and I welcome you to my tournament where you will fight others like you for items from different times of history to win my old time travel artifact."

After few seconds of silence the young man answered-"You are right, this isn't Hell, it is Heaven."

"You are a strange fellow."-said Father of Time-"your name?"

"Ryan."-answered with no hesitation.

"Ryan, do you wish participate in my tournament?" asked the god of time.

"More than anything else."-shaking as he had seen a miracle, he give his answer.

Starting so a little adventure with a curious young on realm of time.

But you never know when little misadventures can take big turns maybe should we should keep an eye on it a little longer to know what will happen next.
here is my audition to time trials oct. this isn't much, I know but I believe that I met all requirements in this short time that i had now lets see if I make it.

Also critique me.
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